by Anuradha Bhattacharyya
The cobra
Raised its hood
Between us;
Did I unfurl my plumes
Before you
Merely for pleasure?
The cobra haunts me
In my sleep,
Gives me the tremors,
Jerks me out of rest.
I thought
The little that binds
Our embraces
Was enough to
Develop a
Mutual regard;
How could I be so
Mistaken?
Since ever since
It emerged
From your pocket
And lurched
Before the rest
Of you, I have understood
That you have
Taken me for a tart.
editor's note: Cobra is a brand of Indian condom
A poem with no outstanding expression ... it does not even initiate a thought ... or else, my inability?
ReplyDeleteDon't pick up a fight with me here, Kiriti !
DeleteSo. The male point of view arrives.
ReplyDeleteI am not a trader of souls; I am a mere mortal, so you'll have to tell me what's the male point of view.
DeleteThe poem asks: What is safe sex?
ReplyDeleteThe male point of view. Tactless, egotistical, and aggressive to start with. Like, fighting with a date in public.
ReplyDeleteAh! the buried deep libido haunts and impels !
ReplyDeleteAs the editor of this journal, I accepted Cobra because I felt that it addressed, among other subjects, the condescending and sexist attitude of some Indian men toward women. I am quite happy that the poem found one of its marks.
ReplyDeleteRussell Streur
Barkeep
confusing...tho d style is gud. Gudluck
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